How to write a good thesis statement

Thesis statement containing below..

1) Must state the subject celar and specifically
2) Take a stand or attitude about the subject
3) Provide of direction by indicating implicity or expelcity.

Thesis statement must also have...
1) Basic stand that an author takes
2) Opinion that he express
3) Major point that he wishes to make about his subject(controlling idea)

Examples:

1)Students should have an ambitions to success in their life through academic and sports.

2)High school graduates should be required to take a year off to pursue community service projects before entering college in order to increase their maturity and global awareness.

3)Our community must work hard to demolish smoking habits in our country.

4)We must realise that constructions is healthy to enviroment in seventy five percentage in this world for nowadays.

5)Youths should be active in sports its can help them preventing in bad activities.

INTRODUCTION

I create this blog because to get more extra information through internet.Besides that i get this idea from my lecturer to create this blog.I thanks to my Academic Writing in English subject lecturer Miss Nurfatiha.Furthermore i create this blog to share information or ideas to my friends around the world.I create this blog using Jason Mraz as a reference blog to publish some of the statement that i want to publish.I also learning the skills to publishing the blog in english language and also i can repair my language from the comments that my friends and my english lecturer tells or gives to me. More over ,i also learning the steps to create a essay,draft ,continues writing and etc that i want to publish.This thing gives me step into professionalism in english.Finally ,i want to tell the benefits to me to create the blog is improves skills in continues writing and etc.

Entry 4

The reason i further my studies is now days knowledge are most important to some one to them achieve their ambitions or to get their jobs.Furthermore, now the competitions between to get any kind of jobs are more competitive.This is one of the factor i further my studies.Besides that i have to further my studies to become a achieving person in my life and also to change my root through my ambition become a famous architect.I can go to oversea through i further my studies.Besides that,the knowledge that i get, after further my studies will be more useful after i finish my studies. I can learn to be independent in thinking after i was in working atmosphere.This knowledge also helps a person in any career.More over furthering studies is look like great achievement for me .And also can earn more money in the job that we studies.Further studies also brings one person in higher position in the community and also earn respect between our community.In further my studies i can change my lifestyle in my live.I also got dreams to achieve the dreams i must further my studies.With i further my studies i can fullfiled dreams on of that are want to be a millionaire and also settled in my live.

Entry 3

09/08/09
Sunday

This movie or story tells about the revenge has fallen to the earth thats the battle between the Autobots and Decepticons.this movie was directed by Michael Bay using a big-budget for the movie.Besides that, the movie starring by La Beouf(Sam Witwicky),Megan Fox(Mia),Tyrese Gibson,Bernie Mac,John Taturo,Jon Voight and of course Optimus Prime and Megatron.Decepticons lead by leader named megatron.Megatron is a brother to Optimus Prime but they role different character.on this movie.Optimus is a leader to the autobots thats the beast robot machines wants to help and protect the world from the Decepticons thats leads by Megatron to destroy the world and gets back his power to rule the world with the Decepticons.In this Transformers 2 movie shows the revenge that fallen to the earth.After Megatron was dead his asistant Starscream sent his decepticons army to reactivate or regenerate Megatron that was under the sea on the care of American navy middle of the Atlantic Ocean.The Decepticons can realive Megatron use a cubeknife that in undercover under America security.The Decepticons finally gets the cubeknife thats in the Museum.The Decepticons achive their target at last that is realive Megatron this warns the world.This bad message sent to Optimus Prime and to the Autobots they alerts the world from the decepticons.Besides that , they prevents the world from the disasters thats create by the Decepticons.The fights between the Autobots and Decepticons scenes at world famous places such as at Egypt and etc.When the wars begun the decepticons kills Optimus Prime at last.But Sam Witwicky not give up he finds the solutions to realive back Optimus Prime because the world and Autobots needs him.Finally Sam Witwicky and his girlfriend finds the another cubeknife that hidden in Egypt desert near to Giza pyramid at last Sam Witwicky realive Optimus Prime to destroy the Decepticons mainly Megatron.At lastly the Autobots wins the war on this time they kills the difficult enemy that is Starscream the major for the Decepticons armies.The robots war on world will not end untill the Decepticons planet destroy

ENTRY 2

9/8/09
Sunday

I want give my suggestion according Jason Mraz descriptions about "THE GRATITUDE CAFE TOUR IS LOOKING FOR VOLUNTEERs"
the cafe entertained all kind of person .Besides that the cafe's got such good and positive activities.Furthermore,the cafe also create unity among the visitors that visit "THE GRATITUDE CAFE'.More over, i had impressed with "The Gratitude Cafe" after i read it and also i read the word the cafe that's helps community.Finally the more volunteer will attends the gratitude cafe.

ENTRY 1

1 August 2009

Saturday

My favourite actor is Tony Jaar he is a hero of ONG BAK 2 the thai film.Before this he was acting 4 films that was Tom Yum Goong,Ong Bak Dragon,Ong Bak 1 and now the latest one is Ong Bak 2.All of the movies he was acting was action movie.He shows a fantastic martial arts fighting on his movies that was Muay Thai martial arts this martial art are comes from thai since the siam empire was build.When Tony Jaar was young he likes martial arts fighting heroes that is Bruce Lee,Jackie Chan,and also Jet lee.Since he small he interest in martial arts.After he 17 year old he learns Thai's tradition kick boxing called Muay Thai.Then he continues for 4 year and he becomes one of the thai's Muay Thai expert.Tony Jaar wants to shows the thai's kick boxing to the world through film industry.He tries and ungive up untill he gets a sponsor .Finally he achieve his targets.The first movie that he acting and also direct the movie name Tom Yum Goong . His directions and actions continiues through the following movies.I like all of his movies.The siamese is came from poor farmer family from thailand and now he is a famous action hero like Bruce Lee.The thai hero hard work brings him to sucess in his life.He also one ofthe role model for me.